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scrapping comic by ~Gettar82:iconGettar82:

Categories Fan Art > Cartoons/Comics > Traditional > Miscellaneous

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just one of the hundred works in progress

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=mbbbbb May 7, 2009, 3:51:16 AM
It looks very promising! :)
I can't wait to see it when it's finished!

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Operative: "You know what your sin is, Mal?"
Mal: "Oh hell. I'm a fan of all seven."
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*Tonuss May 7, 2009, 4:14:07 AM
Awesome, can't wait to see the finished result!

One suggestion- the characters in panel one should be facing right, not left.

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The Saga of the H8 Samurai, a web comic --> [LINK]
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*victortky May 7, 2009, 7:29:04 AM
very amazing characters.

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~Gettar82 May 7, 2009, 7:52:10 AM
:D

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~Gettar82 May 7, 2009, 7:52:33 AM
why? :?

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~Gettar82 May 7, 2009, 7:52:54 AM
:wave:

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~Samihameha May 7, 2009, 8:08:35 AM
Again, I love your style :D. Youre reimagining a page of Battle angel alita in your own, hum hum, "preferences"?
You perv... =P

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“If you need to think before acting, you open yourself to doubt, to hestitation, to failure.”
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*Tonuss May 7, 2009, 8:16:43 AM
It affects the flow of the page from the reader's view. Since your readers will normally read from left-to-right and top-to-bottom, you want the art to guide the reader through the page in that direction.

This makes the panels where the characters turn towards the left more effective, because they indicate a pause in the action.

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The Saga of the H8 Samurai, a web comic --> [LINK]
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